Black & Kinky Amongst Brown Waves


napowrimo challenge: 28 of 30
April 30, 2013, 9:53 pm
Filed under: travel

i always like playing around with poetic forms. this one is from Malaysia.

 

summertime pantoum
© 2013 by margaux delotte-bennett

in the summer of my dreams
I will be making my way to the beach
the ocean’s pull is hypnotic
I need the sand under my feet

I will be making my way to the beach
as a way to bare my soul to the sun
I need the sand under my feet
all of the natural elements in one

as a way to bare my soul to the sun
the surf and sand in perpetual motion
all of the natural elements in one
wind, earth, heat and water; a healing potion

the surf and sand in perpetual motion
the ocean’s pull is hypnotic
wind, earth, heat and water; a healing potion
in the summer of my dreams

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Love it. the subject suits the pattern-scheme perfectly!

Comment by mh




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